Friday, November 4, 2011

Wanna hold the time...

I discovered my Life
With you
Never seen god
But seen his shadow within you.

Wanna hold the time
We met
That moment is most precious
Till date.

The first time I saw you
Had all around only love's breeze
Thats why, I tell my watch
To let that moment to stop and freeze.


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  1. Very nice!

    I'm happy you visited my blog so I might find your lovely poem.

    You are always welcome-

    Namaste & Aloha from Honolulu

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  2. That is simple-y beautiful .. Indeed first moments of love are closest to heart, making us want to live and feel that moment again n again..

  3. "seen his shadow within you"

    Who wouldn't want to stop time at that point? ♥

  4. I love the lines
    Never seen god
    but his shadow in you...
    And the idea of preserving the moment.
    Beautiful poem.

  5. Lovely poem. It is true that we would often like to freeze a moment in time to enjoy it forever. Hugs, pat

  6. Ruchi- This was just amazing and very romantic. Very well written

  7. Beautiful. I wish I could freeze time too. :(

  8. Beautiful, romantic and what a novel interpretation of the image.
    Loved it.